The educational system is very important in every country in the world.The educational system in one country is not identical to the system in any other country.The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.In this essay,we will talk about the educational system in Egypt.
The educational system isn`t compulsory and free.It is very bad for many reasons.Firstly,it depends on theoretical materials rather than practical materials and this requires memorizing not understanding.Secondly,the teacher`s level isn`t strong enough to teach materials to the students correctly. Thirdly, the buildings of schools are very old and lack of new equipments,laboratories,and libraries. Fourthly, because of increasing of population,we find a large number of students in the classroom,and this has bad effect on students` understanding.
We will try to introduce some solutions of these problems.Firstly,people who is putting materials should balance between theoretical and practical materials.Secondly,teachers should go to the the places of training to improve their level.Thirdly,the old buildings should be improved and supported by new equipments. Fourthly,the school`s management should increase the number of classrooms to absorb the large number of students.
As we say that the educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture. So,we should improve our educational system in order to reflect the good aspects to other cultures and if we like our country.
Sunday, November 21, 2010
Monday, November 8, 2010
The educational system in Egypt { The First draft }
The educational system is very important in every country in the world.The educational system in one country is not identical to the system in any other country.The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.In this essay,we will talk about the educational system in Egypt.
The educational system isn`t compulsory and free.It is very bad for many reasons.Firstly,it depends on theoretical materials rather than practical materials and this requires memorizing not understanding.Secondly,the teacher`s level isn`t strong enough to teach materials to the students correctly. Thirdly, the buildings of schools are very old and lack of new equipments,laboratories,and libraries. Fourthly, because of increasing of population,we find a large number of students in the classroom,and this has bad effect on students` understanding.
We will try to introduce some solutions of these problems.Firstly,people who is putting materials should balance between theoretical and practical materials.Secondly,teachers should go to the the places of training to improve their level.Thirdly,the old buildings should be improved and supported by new equipments. Fourthly,the school`s management should increase the number of classrooms to absorb the large number of students.
As we say that the educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture. So,we should improve our educational system in order to reflect the good aspects to other cultures and if we like our country.
The educational system isn`t compulsory and free.It is very bad for many reasons.Firstly,it depends on theoretical materials rather than practical materials and this requires memorizing not understanding.Secondly,the teacher`s level isn`t strong enough to teach materials to the students correctly. Thirdly, the buildings of schools are very old and lack of new equipments,laboratories,and libraries. Fourthly, because of increasing of population,we find a large number of students in the classroom,and this has bad effect on students` understanding.
We will try to introduce some solutions of these problems.Firstly,people who is putting materials should balance between theoretical and practical materials.Secondly,teachers should go to the the places of training to improve their level.Thirdly,the old buildings should be improved and supported by new equipments. Fourthly,the school`s management should increase the number of classrooms to absorb the large number of students.
As we say that the educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture. So,we should improve our educational system in order to reflect the good aspects to other cultures and if we like our country.
The educational system in Egypt{Outline}
The introduction paragraph:
The educational system is very important in every country in the world.The educational system in one country is not identical to the system in any other country.The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.
Body:
1.The reasons which make the educational system in Egypt is very bad:
A.The dependence on theoretical material not practical.
B.The teacher`s level is not strong.
C.The buildings of schools are very old and lack of new equipments.
DA large number of students in the class room.
2.The suggested solutions for these problems:
A.The balance between theoretical and practical materials.
B.Teachers should go to the places of training.
C.The old building should be improved and supported by new equipments.
D.The school`s management should increase the number of classrooms.
The conclusion:
As we say that the educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.So, we should improve our educational system in order to reflect the good aspects to other countries and if we love our country.
The educational system is very important in every country in the world.The educational system in one country is not identical to the system in any other country.The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.
Body:
1.The reasons which make the educational system in Egypt is very bad:
A.The dependence on theoretical material not practical.
B.The teacher`s level is not strong.
C.The buildings of schools are very old and lack of new equipments.
DA large number of students in the class room.
2.The suggested solutions for these problems:
A.The balance between theoretical and practical materials.
B.Teachers should go to the places of training.
C.The old building should be improved and supported by new equipments.
D.The school`s management should increase the number of classrooms.
The conclusion:
As we say that the educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.So, we should improve our educational system in order to reflect the good aspects to other countries and if we love our country.
Monday, November 1, 2010
Women`s Work {The final draft}
Women`s work is an important argumentative topic for talking about.We found that the number of working women in the Egyptian society is increased.Absolutely,some people agree with this phenomenon and others disagree with it.We will talk about the reasons for each opinion in this essay.
On the one hand,some people agree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;{Money,Divorce,Flexibility,Self-confidence}.Moneyis one of the reasons for woman to work ,as woman works to help her family,her husband if she is married and provide high standard of living for her children.Divorce is another reason.Women who are divorced especially if they haven`t got any babies,would feel lonely, because they haven`t any thing to do.So,she begins looking for a job to change the style of her life and make herself busy to get ride of the feeling of loneliness.Another reason is flexibility,working woman is flexible,because her work gives her the opportunity to make contacts with other people.Unlike woman at home deals only with her family and other relatives and when she meets new people,she would find some difficulties in dealing with them.The last reason is increasing self-confidence.
On the other hand,some people disagree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;Home duties ,because some women don`t balance between the work and their family due to lack of time and emotional feelings and the result of this is the lack of love and supervision of children.Those children when they are growing into adults,they have lack of loving family and are ill educated how to raise a family and be good parents in the future.Another reason is that woman faces many problems in her work in the public sector that they are rarely obtaining temporarily permits,so they are forced to resort to a rigid sick to request leaving without paying,while in the private sector ,this can be hardly determined due to the variability from place to place and the absence of the laws of salaries and there is not balance between salaries and the nature of work.Another reason is the society`s point of view on the working woman .In the public sector women are receiving the best chance of appreciation,respect and less criticism from the society.While in the private sector ,the society`s view is unfair.In most cases back to the community`s mind and stories from the media which is full of mixing that they think that it affects woman`s reputation.So,this view makes many womens are prevented from working whether in the public or the private sector.An example of it,I once watched an episode of a programme on TV talk about the women`s work.There was a young man possibly in his early 20`s said that he will not allow his wife to work ,because he believed that a woman`s place is her home.
In my opinion,i agree with the work of woman.So,to say that women should stay at home is a wrong thing"in my opinion" and is said by people who only thinks of themselves because our country needs us .We are the driving force behind its progress.So,we all need to work together no matter,a man or woman.
On the one hand,some people agree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;{Money,Divorce,Flexibility,Self-confidence}.Moneyis one of the reasons for woman to work ,as woman works to help her family,her husband if she is married and provide high standard of living for her children.Divorce is another reason.Women who are divorced especially if they haven`t got any babies,would feel lonely, because they haven`t any thing to do.So,she begins looking for a job to change the style of her life and make herself busy to get ride of the feeling of loneliness.Another reason is flexibility,working woman is flexible,because her work gives her the opportunity to make contacts with other people.Unlike woman at home deals only with her family and other relatives and when she meets new people,she would find some difficulties in dealing with them.The last reason is increasing self-confidence.
On the other hand,some people disagree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;Home duties ,because some women don`t balance between the work and their family due to lack of time and emotional feelings and the result of this is the lack of love and supervision of children.Those children when they are growing into adults,they have lack of loving family and are ill educated how to raise a family and be good parents in the future.Another reason is that woman faces many problems in her work in the public sector that they are rarely obtaining temporarily permits,so they are forced to resort to a rigid sick to request leaving without paying,while in the private sector ,this can be hardly determined due to the variability from place to place and the absence of the laws of salaries and there is not balance between salaries and the nature of work.Another reason is the society`s point of view on the working woman .In the public sector women are receiving the best chance of appreciation,respect and less criticism from the society.While in the private sector ,the society`s view is unfair.In most cases back to the community`s mind and stories from the media which is full of mixing that they think that it affects woman`s reputation.So,this view makes many womens are prevented from working whether in the public or the private sector.An example of it,I once watched an episode of a programme on TV talk about the women`s work.There was a young man possibly in his early 20`s said that he will not allow his wife to work ,because he believed that a woman`s place is her home.
In my opinion,i agree with the work of woman.So,to say that women should stay at home is a wrong thing"in my opinion" and is said by people who only thinks of themselves because our country needs us .We are the driving force behind its progress.So,we all need to work together no matter,a man or woman.
Saturday, October 23, 2010
Women`s work {The first draft}
Women`s work is an important argumentative topic for talking about.We found that the number of working women in the Egyptian society.Absolutely,some people agree with this phenomenon and others disagree with it.We will talk about the reasons for each opinion in this essay.
On the one hand,some people agree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;Money is one of the reasons for woman to work ,as woman works to help her family,her husband if she is married and provide high standard of living for her children.Divorce is another reason.Women who are divorced especially if they haven`t got any babies,would feel lonely, because they haven`t any thing to do.So,she begins looking for a job to change the style of her life and make herself busy to get ride of the feeling of loneliness.Another reason is flexibility,working woman is flexible,because her work gives her the opportunity to make contacts with other people,unlike woman at home deals only with her family and other relatives and when she meets new people,she would find some difficulties in dealing with them.The last reason is increasing self-confidence.
On the other hand,some people disagree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;household tasks and child rearing ,because some women don`t balance between the work and their family due to lack of time and emotional feelings and the result of this is the lack of love and supervision of children.Those children when they are growing into adults,they have lack of loving family and are ill educated how to raise a family and be good parents in the future.Another reason is that woman faces many problems in her work in the public sector that they are rarely obtaining temporarily permits,so they are forced to resort to a rigid sick to request leaving without paying,while in the private sector ,this can be hardly determined due to the variability from place to place and the absence of the laws of salaries and there is not balance between salaries and the nature of work.Another reason is the society`s point of view on the working woman .In the public sector women are received the best chance of appreciation,respect and less criticism from the society.While in the private sector ,the society`s view is unfair.In most cases back to the community`s mind and stories from the media which is full of mixing that they think that it affects woman`s reputation.So,this view makes many women`s are prevented from working whether in the public or the private sector.An example of it,I once watched an episode of a programme on TV talk about the women`s work.There was a young man possibly in his early 20`s said that he will not allowed his wife to work ,because he believed that a woman`s place is her home.
In my opinion,i agree with the work of woman.So,to say that women should stay at home is a selfish thing and is said by people who only thinks of themselves because our country needs us .We are the driving force behind its progress.So,we all need to work together no matter,a man or woman.
On the one hand,some people agree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;Money is one of the reasons for woman to work ,as woman works to help her family,her husband if she is married and provide high standard of living for her children.Divorce is another reason.Women who are divorced especially if they haven`t got any babies,would feel lonely, because they haven`t any thing to do.So,she begins looking for a job to change the style of her life and make herself busy to get ride of the feeling of loneliness.Another reason is flexibility,working woman is flexible,because her work gives her the opportunity to make contacts with other people,unlike woman at home deals only with her family and other relatives and when she meets new people,she would find some difficulties in dealing with them.The last reason is increasing self-confidence.
On the other hand,some people disagree with the work of woman for some reasons such as;household tasks and child rearing ,because some women don`t balance between the work and their family due to lack of time and emotional feelings and the result of this is the lack of love and supervision of children.Those children when they are growing into adults,they have lack of loving family and are ill educated how to raise a family and be good parents in the future.Another reason is that woman faces many problems in her work in the public sector that they are rarely obtaining temporarily permits,so they are forced to resort to a rigid sick to request leaving without paying,while in the private sector ,this can be hardly determined due to the variability from place to place and the absence of the laws of salaries and there is not balance between salaries and the nature of work.Another reason is the society`s point of view on the working woman .In the public sector women are received the best chance of appreciation,respect and less criticism from the society.While in the private sector ,the society`s view is unfair.In most cases back to the community`s mind and stories from the media which is full of mixing that they think that it affects woman`s reputation.So,this view makes many women`s are prevented from working whether in the public or the private sector.An example of it,I once watched an episode of a programme on TV talk about the women`s work.There was a young man possibly in his early 20`s said that he will not allowed his wife to work ,because he believed that a woman`s place is her home.
In my opinion,i agree with the work of woman.So,to say that women should stay at home is a selfish thing and is said by people who only thinks of themselves because our country needs us .We are the driving force behind its progress.So,we all need to work together no matter,a man or woman.
Women`s work {outlines}
1-the introduction paragraph:
a.Women`s work is an important argumentative topic for talking about.
b.Some people agree with and others disagree with this phenomenon and each of them have their own reasons.
2-The reasons which make women to join workforce:
a.Money.
b.Divorce.
c.Flexibility.
d.The increasing of self-confidence.
3-The reasons which prevent women from joining workforce:
a.Home duties and child rearing.
b.The problems that faces the working women.
c.The society`s point of view on the working women.
4-The conclusion paragraph:
a.In my opinion,I agree with the work of woman.
b.The say that woman should stay at home is a selfish thing ,because our country needs us.
a.Women`s work is an important argumentative topic for talking about.
b.Some people agree with and others disagree with this phenomenon and each of them have their own reasons.
2-The reasons which make women to join workforce:
a.Money.
b.Divorce.
c.Flexibility.
d.The increasing of self-confidence.
3-The reasons which prevent women from joining workforce:
a.Home duties and child rearing.
b.The problems that faces the working women.
c.The society`s point of view on the working women.
4-The conclusion paragraph:
a.In my opinion,I agree with the work of woman.
b.The say that woman should stay at home is a selfish thing ,because our country needs us.
Sunday, October 17, 2010
pollution{the final draft}
Pollution is considered one of the major problems in Egypt.Pollution is the act or process of pollution or the state of being polluted,especially the contamination of soil,water,or the atmosphere by the discharge of harmful substances.We talk in this essay about air pollution.Air pollution is the pollution of atmosphere.
Firstly,we talk about the causes of air pollution.One of the main causes of air pollution is the exhaust of the cars especially after the increasing of the cars` number.Another cause is the using of insecticides in the agriculture areas.Another cause is the flame of industries in the industrial areas.
Secondly,we talk about the results of air pollution.Air pollution reduced the visibility.One of the major results of this problem is the spread of the diseases among people especially the diseases of respiratory system.Another result is the increasing of temperature,then the increasing of electricity consuming.
Thirdly,we talk about the suggested solutions about this problem.The government have to specify places to smoking.Smokers should decrease smoking.The government have to put rules to force people and industries to use filters in their cars and industries .Farmers should decrease the using of insecticides.
So,we found that the air pollution is ahuge problem,and we wish to co-operate with the government to solve this grief and enjoy our life in purity and neatness.
Friday, October 8, 2010
pollution
Pollution is considered one of the major problems in Egypt.Pollution is the act or process of pollution or the state of being polluted,especially the contamination of soil,water,or the atmosphere by the discharge of harmful substances.We talk in this essay about air pollution.Air pollution is the pollution of atmosphere.
Firstly,we talk about the causes of air pollution.One of the main causes of air pollution is the exhaust of the cars especially after the increasing of the cars` number.Another cause is the using of insecticides in the agriculture areas.Another cause is the flame of industries in the industrial areas.
Secondly,we talk about the results of air pollution.Air pollution reduced the visibility.One of the major results of this problem is the spread the diseases among people especially the diseases of respiratory system.Another result is the increasing of temperature,then the increasing of electricity consuming.
Thirdly,we talk about the suggested solutions about this problem.The government have to specify places to smoke.Smokers should decrease smoking.The government have to put rules to force people and industries to use filters in their cars and industries .Farmers should decrease the using of insecticides.
So,we found that the air pollution is ahuge problem,and we wish to co-operate with the government to solve this grief and enjoy our life in purity and neatness.
Wednesday, October 6, 2010
pollution
Pollution is considered one of the major problems in Egypt.Pollution is the act or process of pollution or the state of being polluted,especially the contamination of soil,water,or the atmosphere by the discharge of harmful substances.We talk in this essay about air pollution.Air pollution is the pollution of atmosphere.
Firstly,we talk about the causes of air pollution.One of the main causes of air pollution is the exhaust of the cars especially after the increasing of the cars` number.Another cause is the using of insecticides in the agriculture areas.Another cause is the flame of industries in the industrial areas.
Secondly,we talk about the results of air pollution.Air pollution reduced the visibility.One of the major results of this problem is the spread the diseases among people especially the diseases of respiratory system.Another result is the increasing of temperature,then the increasing of electricity consuming.
Thirdly,,we talk about the suggested solutions about this problem.The government have to specify places to smoke.Smokers should decrease smoking.The government have to put rules to force people and industries to use filters in their cars and industries .Farmers should decrease the using of insecticides.
So,we found that the air pollution is ahuge problem,and we wish to co-operate with the government to solve this grief and enjoy our life in purity and neatness.
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
The causes and effects of air pollution (prewriting) first draft
1. Introduction paragraph
a. The meaning of air pollution
b. Air pollution is considered one of the major problems in egypt
2. The causes of air pollution paragraph
a. Smoke of cars
b. Insecticide
c. The flameof industries
d. Smoking
3. The effect of air pollution
a. The spread of diseases
b. The increase of temperature
c. The increase of electricity consuming
4. The suggested solution
a. The use of filters in the cars and industries
b. Decreasing of insecticide
c. Putting up rules to punish smokers
5. Conclusion paragraph
So, we found that the air pollution is ahuge problem and we wish to cooperate with the government to solve this grief and enjoy our life in purity and neatness.
a. The meaning of air pollution
b. Air pollution is considered one of the major problems in egypt
2. The causes of air pollution paragraph
a. Smoke of cars
b. Insecticide
c. The flameof industries
d. Smoking
3. The effect of air pollution
a. The spread of diseases
b. The increase of temperature
c. The increase of electricity consuming
4. The suggested solution
a. The use of filters in the cars and industries
b. Decreasing of insecticide
c. Putting up rules to punish smokers
5. Conclusion paragraph
So, we found that the air pollution is ahuge problem and we wish to cooperate with the government to solve this grief and enjoy our life in purity and neatness.
Friday, October 1, 2010
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