Wednesday, October 6, 2010

pollution

       Pollution is considered one of the major problems in Egypt.Pollution is the act or process of pollution or the state of being polluted,especially the contamination of soil,water,or the atmosphere by the discharge of harmful substances.We talk in this essay about air pollution.Air pollution is the pollution of atmosphere.
       
      Firstly,we talk about the causes of air pollution.One of the main causes of air pollution is the exhaust of the cars especially after the increasing of the cars` number.Another cause is the using of insecticides in the agriculture areas.Another cause is the flame of industries in the industrial areas.
      Secondly,we talk about the results of air pollution.Air pollution reduced the visibility.One of the major results of this problem is the spread the diseases among people especially the diseases of respiratory system.Another result is the increasing of temperature,then the increasing of electricity consuming.

     Thirdly,,we talk about the suggested solutions about this problem.The government have to specify places to smoke.Smokers should decrease smoking.The government have to put rules to force people and industries to use filters in their cars and industries .Farmers should decrease the using of insecticides.

     So,we found that the air pollution is ahuge problem,and we wish to co-operate with the government to solve this grief and enjoy our life in purity and neatness. 

9 comments:

  1. Congratulations Yosra on your excellent essay.
    1. your content is sufficient
    2. your introduaction is interesting
    3. the organization is well developed.
    the vocabulary is clear and well understood.

    I ask you to access the weblogs of Aya Ragab, Tanseem, Elham and read their essays and try to send corrections about their essays to their weblogs. if you need help use the editing checklist I uploaded to the class weblog.

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  2. good and simple essay..yosra
    well done

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  3. Great essay Yosra . Your essay is simple and understandable. I hope the best to you for ever in shaa Allah

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  4. God bless you, you have smmrized the issue ,keep up ,I'm waiting your comment on my final draft

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  5. thanks for your comments on my essay Ihope success for all of you and me with you

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  6. excellent work yosra your sentences are clear .The essay has a specific and clear purpose .The essay has a clear introduction, a body and a definite conclusion .keep working .

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