Monday, November 8, 2010

The educational system in Egypt { The First draft }

           The educational system is very important in every country in the world.The educational system in one country is not identical to the system in any other country.The educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture.In this essay,we will talk about the educational system in Egypt.

          The educational system isn`t compulsory and free.It is very bad for many reasons.Firstly,it depends on theoretical materials rather than practical materials and this requires memorizing not understanding.Secondly,the teacher`s level isn`t strong enough to teach materials to the students correctly. Thirdly, the buildings of schools are very old and lack of new equipments,laboratories,and libraries. Fourthly, because of increasing of population,we find a large number of students in the classroom,and this has bad effect on students` understanding.

         We will try to introduce some solutions of these problems.Firstly,people who is putting materials should balance between theoretical and practical materials.Secondly,teachers should go to the the places of training to improve their level.Thirdly,the old buildings should be improved and supported by new equipments. Fourthly,the school`s management should increase the number of classrooms to absorb the large number of students.

         As we say that the educational system is a mirror that reflects the culture. So,we should improve our educational system in order to reflect the good  aspects to other cultures and if we like our country.

4 comments:

  1. hi YOUO , AGOOD TOPIC BUT PLEASE TAKE CARE OF YOUR FONT SIZE ,IT IS TOO SMALE .

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  2. good one yosra.it is simple and easy to understand.i tried to find mistakes on it but as my knowledge is limited in correcting essay i think you should say (if you love ) instead of if you like at the last line .
    but excellent yosra i liked it too much.

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  3. very good essay yosra.
    1.your essay is well organized and developed.
    2.your introduction is very interesting.
    3.your sentences and ideas are clear and simple.
    but your essay needs more information to be more sufficient.well done yosra and keep doing.

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  4. O.K. Yosra. Good draft.
    Go aheda and write the final draft.

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